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Loch files 4

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ERROR CODE 3352-9444 danAgeD FILE PArT 3>
ATTEmPTING RECONSTRUCTION.......................................

SO, WHILE I FIx THE FILE LETS TALK...........
DO YOU REMEMBER THE THING I WAS GOING TO TELL YOU BEFORE.......
I WAS GOING TO SAY I CAN NOT BELIEVE THAT A CHILD LIKE THAT <FIN> WOULD BECOME THE KING OF TRON SOMEDAY.............
WELL THEN AGAIN HIS FATHER WAS THE KING, BUT HE DID HAVE AN OLDER BROTHER ...........
OH YA, I FORGOT ABOUT THAT, HE WAS ADOPTED, WASN'T HE........
HEY, PLEASE DO NOT BE RUDE, I AM REPAIRING THE FILE AS FAST AS I CAN.........
YOU SPELLED USELESS WRONG, THERE ARE TWO LETTER SS........
YOU KNOW I UNDERSTAND TANTAR TOO RIGHT, AND I AM NOT A NA'A-C"OROTAR........
OH DEAR........ERROR CODE <sevensevenTWOFIVE>
I SEEM TO HAVE LOST THE NAME OF ONE OF THE CreaTURES, ALL I HAVE IS <INSERT-GRANOR-S1-NAME-HERE> IN THE FILE, WHAT WAS IT AGAIN...........
OH YES THE FIRST GRANOR IN THE STORY WAS cALLED A StALKER, i THANK YOU...............
I AM TRYING TO GO vERY FaSt PLeASE WAIT A SECONd...........
ITS OK hOPeFUllY IT WoNT HAPPEN again
OK ITS dONE!!!!!!!!
rESUMING PLAYBACK>



Ziz-zar, and Fin walked deeper into the ruined city behind Loch, Fin had his arms crossed and angrily looked off to the side as he walked. Suddenly something moving thru the shadows in an alleyway, caught the young Tantar's eye and he stopped, and peered into the dark alley. Suddenly a small dark creature with red eyes and three spikes on hits head leaped out from the shadows, causing Fin to yelp and jump backward, and stumble on his butt.

At the yelp Ziz quicky spun around and fearfully yelled "FIN!" but released a sigh of relief when he saw what was happening, "come on fin, its only a darkness....." he said, walking over to Fin who was now being looked over curiously by the creature's red eyes.

"D-D-Darkness?" Fin squeaked, still a little shaken up.

Ziz-zar walked up to the Darkness and shooed it away with his hands. It retreated back into the alleyway and vanished. "Yup, a Darkness, they're lesser elementals of darkness. Harmless really, they're just attracted to fear, and dark gloomy places like this. Nothing to worry about...... So.." he continued smiling as he helped Fin up, "who's the scaredy-cat now?"

"Shut up!" Fin groaned, "I wasn't scared, I was just.... practicing a new fighting technique!"

Loch smiled and called from a little ways ahead, "come on you two, time to get moving, we're almost there." then he trued and continued walking.

"You sure?" Ziz asked running up behind him to catch up, "I Mean, what if he already got to it?"

"Oh he's still here alright" Loch answered suddenly becoming very serious.

"How do you know?" Fin asked curiously.

"Because I can sense his aura covering this entire city" Loch replied as they approached a large, old looking building.

"Is he really that powerful?" Fin asked sounding slightly nervous.

Suddenly a Dark armor clad being emerged from the building, holding something in one of his hands, and a large Black, green, and dark purple sword in the other.

It looked toward the trio and stopped, then said in a deep metallic echoing voice, "I think I can answer that"

MANUAL PAUSE>
part four, kinda short, but the error seems a little odd, i may fix it up a little later
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